Critique my new song "It shouldn't be long, honey"!!

jimmiebananas

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Hi Everyone,

It's been a while since I've finished an original song, but this is the latest.

I'm looking for critiques on everything but the production, I need to figure out how to control the levels as they peak much too often and get distorted.

Anyway, you can find "It shouldn't be long, honey" here:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=431654&content=music

And the lyrics are:
It was only a scare, honey
It was only a scare
It was only a scare, honey
It was only a scare

Just a little bit more now, and I'll be there.


Now it wont be long, honey
It won't be long
No it won't be long, honey
It won't be long

Gonna take some time now, and right this wrong


But I'll be ok, honey
I'll be ok
And I'll be ok, honey
I'll be ok

If I can make it through the night now, i can make it through the day


Tell 'em I'm fine, honey
Tell 'em I'm fine
Tell 'em i'm fine
I've been watching the news reels, and I'm seeing good signs.

And I'll be alright, honey
I'll be alright
And i'll be alright, honey
I'll be alright

If I can make it through the day now, I can make it through the night

Just a little bit more, honey
Just a little bit more
Just a little bit more
We need a little bit more

It won't be long until we settle the score.

As always, any and all input is greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.
 
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