Critique me please!

[Robertt8]

KGIRL72:I'll bet your going to need a martini to warm your selves up out there in Nebraska! I'll put one back for you tonight as well...have a good one!


14YEAROLDKID:No prob...(I posted this a bit further back, but i know it's a bitch to read every post)

Mic: Studio Projects C1 Or Studop Projects B1 (I can't remember)
Pre-Amp: M-Audio Audio Buddy
Outboard Compressor: Behringer Ultra Dyne Pro
Recorder: Roland VS-880EX (8 track) here I used a couple internal effects like reverb, delay, and a mastering option)
Guitar: Big Baby Taylor
Bass: Shitty Squire
Drum Machine: Boss Dr. Rhythm 770

I can go into more detail of the tracking n' shit if you'd like...lemme know.

 

[lumbago]

I really enjoyed it. Nice playing, vox, noises, production.

It needs the obligatory single vibraslap hit .... ;-)

 

[Robertt8]

LUMBAGO: Thanks! I'm assuming that when you say noises, you mean all the instruments n' stuff...not that there are noises in the song...I haven't noticed any of those, but you never know. As for that vibraslap, I think i end up tossing that mindlessly into most of my songs anyway. I took a break on this one. Thanks for listening!