Yeah man... I couldn't do a damn thing with the electric guitar part! (But I'll give her a go in the morning with your advice.. Thanks)
* I came back and edited this post after thinking about your instrumental lead in idea... I wasn't seeing how that would work and keep the same energy, but NOW I DO! (and dude you are a genius!!!)
How about the song kicks of on the "Bombastic" D-A D-A??!!
(Like "Bleach Blonde! Bleach Blonde!, but of course WITHOUT the lyrics)
THEN does a few bars of Solo over the verse progression, THEN "Breaks Down" the way it begins now and the lyrics come in?? (I Love that idea and would have never thought of it!)
Same with the Solo I would have never thought of it... I DIG IT!
(I have to assume here that you have the tune at your disposal, or can go back a few posts to where I put up the lyrics, but bare with me ...)
SO, would it go through the first verse including "La la la la la la" , THEN do a chrous ("Hollyw- Hollyw you know you just don't need it. Hollyw-Hollyw you know you just can't beat it. Hw Hw")
THEN INSTEAD of a dead stop (My trademark lol) would the instruments comp the "La la la la la la" notes and cadence (But exageratedly so the Solo guitar) THEN it launchs off into a big pop guitar solo over another verse progression THEN the lyrics come back in with the "No need to worry, she aint in a hurry she's just hanging out yeah and having fun.." (With the solo guitar call and responding to the vocal line in finaly of the solo), THEN "La la la la la la" AGAIN, THEN the second verse ("He's making the big loot..") and the song would play out to the end as it does now?
It sooooo works with the natural flow of the tune, requires no additional lyrics and will pad the time in my rough estimation about 75 seconds!
Sound good?