I'm not trying to keep this thread alive, but I did want to take the time to thank everyone who listened to the tune.  I'm floored by everyone's comments, thanks!
JitteringJim:  I didn't spend as much time as you would think.  I knew from the first time I played it where I wanted it to go.  I wish they all cooperated the way this one did!  
Oh yeah, I haven't ruled out that I'm an asshole to work with too!  I still want to put a band together though, I want to be able to take this stuff to the people...I love playing live.  I've got to find some players damn it!  Maybe I can find the courage to do something in all of the supportive and flattering posts you guys have written.  Thanks again guys!