Well, it is a well written tune and nicely performed. The recording leaves a lot to be desired, however. On the first track, the guitar is too bright and lacks any of the "woodiness" of the acoustic. Mic choice and placement are keys to getting a more natural tone. You have to experiment a lot to find the right spot for the mic. For starters, I would place it about 1 foot from the guitar pointed at the neck/body joint. Then mess around to find the best spot.
The tone of the guitar on the second link is better, perhaps because the compressor is killing some of the harshness.
The vocal has some plosives that could be decreased with a pop filter.