Best View In The Room

[MattNZ]

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6877017

I put this in the mixing clinic, but would like some feedback on the song structrure, melody, arrangement etc.

My personal feeling is that it needs a break after the second chorus. Any other ideas/contributions?

 

[up-fiddler]

I like the song structure and the vox. It would be very helpful for most of us if you were to include a lyric sheet in your original post. I'm not a huge fan of 25 second intros. If the song is great then get to it and let us have it. I DO like the long repetitious lead at the end though. It builds tension for the listener and ends dramatically. It makes for a clever use of distorted guitar.