To take it a step further I agree with the other guys...electronic drums should sound electronic..this kinda track would suit electronic as well as acoustic...saying that there is no reason why "fake " drums shouldnt sound real..
take the opening cymbal...each hit is exactly the same...now if you worked on the velocity and maybe nudged the second hit slightly out of time it will feel/sound more human...before the rest of the track kicks in we already know the drums are "fake"
I spend more time on drums than any other instrument...they are crucial to getting the track sounding right so spend time on them...and with acoustic samples dont quantize or do so sparingly..say 60-80%
that being said I liked the track...sounds good just needs tweaking..I think the kick is totally MIA on my sytem (I am turning into "mini Greg") and work on humanising that snare...I find getting more out of the bottom mic brings up the rattle, helps it cut through the mix and adds to the realism..pop on top, rattle below...mmmm nice
There too much emphasis on the overheads which is bringing out the cymbals, washing over everything..add that to soundclicks 128kbps compression of the mp3 and you've got a distorted fake sounding mess, I know because I love cymbals and went through the same problems with them...try one of the 320kbps sites to hear the difference and for getting in depth critiques on mixes
I hope my limited experience helps
