Fuck it, I'll jam alone....

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I put the instrumental tracks up for this a few weeks ago in my "Let's Jam!" thread. But only one person came up with anything.

So I said "Fuck it"....and finished it myself.:p

Advice, criticism, and shit like that, is always welcome.

PIRHANAS
 
Nice work. Good balance and feel. That's a hot lead gtr at 3:00 to the end.
 
Rami, Duder! Put it in my folder with your other track and I'll give you some stuff! Looks like that's the only way I'll get it. ;)

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I put the instrumental tracks up for this a few weeks ago in my "Let's Jam!" thread. But only one person came up with anything.


Well, actually two people, but we're probably better off not counting mine. ha ha ha :D

I like what you've got here a whole lot better.

Cheers,
 
Sorry RAMI - as a guitarist I haven't the chops to offer anything.
As a bass player I jsut listen to your tracks and wish...
As a singer - well the Mrs won't even let me hum around the house.
So that leaves me as a listener really & from that perspective...
I like the effected vox intro.
The rhythm section is like the pulse of a tazer victim - hard, fast & pumping blood faster than the eyeballs can hold in.
The guitars are meaner than usual - good lead tone particularly.
Let's face it - you did it!
 
Hey RAMI,

I didn't notice your "Let's Jam" thread, i'll have something up soon if that's still ok?

I love the mix, the drums are really crisp and you have nice chops on the solo's.
 
I offered to add some spoon tracks and never got a response.

sounds really good Rami, always like your mixes and music...missing some spoons though on this one. fill some small holes around 2:45 to 2:47 and also at 2:54-2:56.

;)
 
Nice work. Good balance and feel. That's a hot lead gtr at 3:00 to the end.
Thanx man!
Sorry RAMI - as a guitarist I haven't the chops to offer anything.
As a bass player I jsut listen to your tracks and wish...
As a singer - well the Mrs won't even let me hum around the house.
So that leaves me as a listener really & from that perspective...
I like the effected vox intro.
The rhythm section is like the pulse of a tazer victim - hard, fast & pumping blood faster than the eyeballs can hold in.
The guitars are meaner than usual - good lead tone particularly.
Let's face it - you did it!
Hehe...Well, I did SOMETHING...Don't know if it's "IT" yet. :D
Hey RAMI,

I didn't notice your "Let's Jam" thread, i'll have something up soon if that's still ok?

I love the mix, the drums are really crisp and you have nice chops on the solo's.
Yeah man, have at it. I think the track is still up.:)
I offered to add some spoon tracks and never got a response.

sounds really good Rami, always like your mixes and music...missing some spoons though on this one. fill some small holes around 2:45 to 2:47 and also at 2:54-2:56.

;)

Thanx man....Hey, I'm still waiting for the spoons!!!:D
 
What an awesome drum sound!!! This groove really stomps :) I'm a singer (among other things) so, maybe next time....

Rich
 
What an awesome drum sound!!! This groove really stomps :) I'm a singer (among other things) so, maybe next time....

Rich

Thanx Blue.....!

Next time, lay some vocals down, that would have been cool.:cool:
 
nice

for some reason it reminds me of a cross between Zeppelins The Wanton Song and John Parr's Naughty Naughty lol

anyway nice work :D:cool::D
 
nice

for some reason it reminds me of a cross between Zeppelins The Wanton Song and John Parr's Naughty Naughty lol

anyway nice work :D:cool::D


Hey Jr, I don't know John Parr...but I can see what you're saying about the Wonton Song. In fact, I went back and listened to it, and I guess that song was sub-conciously tattoed to my brain, because that's pretty much the same groove. Oh well....a nod to the 70's. :D :D :D
 
I hate to say it.....but that is one of the all-around best songs I've heard on forums, period. Very creative and very well mixed. Damn.:eek::cool:


You youngsters are pretty damn good.:p
 
Nice..
That was a killer song Rami,great arrangement and playing!
It's probably my speakers as I am not listening in the studio,you might want to take a look at slightly lowering your low mids, the vocals can come up a bit too IMHO.It may just be Mp3 compression though.Just re-listened in studio,your mix is perfect, don't change a thing!
Rock On!
 
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SORRY, Rami!

I was the first dumb to came here and said that "I´m IN"!

I came home, tried a lot of solos ...and the thing was tottaly "technical", not musical ...really dont worked.:(

I was almost PM you to a new mp3 without the solos, but you posted the vocal version ... and it´s alright as ever, good vocals and melody...

Ciro
 
..............:D

I put the instrumental tracks up for this a few weeks ago in my "Let's Jam!" thread. But only one person came up with anything.

So I said "Fuck it"....and finished it myself.:p

Advice, criticism, and shit like that, is always welcome.

PIRHANAS

I don't remember a "let's jam" thread, but I couldn't add anything worthwhile anyway. Great song. :)
 
I'm In!!!

Hey anytime you wanna do another "lets jam" email me! I'm in!! I've been trying to get something going on another message board and having no luck. This invite is for anyone who wants to collaborate on a song or two. I usually have two or three songs I'm stuck on anyway. I'm in to punk/metal/classic rock/ anything that has real instruments. Not that I don't like electronic, but I prefer to feel an instrument when I play, not feel the mouse. ;)

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Thanx alot for the comments, guys. I wrote and recorded this tune pretty quick. I didn't expect such good feedback from it. Thank you.
 
This song really kicks ass! I loved the guitar solos and it has a great groove.
I don't know if it's the vocals or what but I here a hint of Lenny Kravitz in this.
Good Work.
 
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