....yeah but can you play fast...?....

[theron]

Great tune,

I'd slap another rhythm git on the right, cut down on the volume of the rhyme git on the left and push the vox up some (Very nice vox BTW!!!).

The git sounds good but, it seems to be carrying too much of the load on rhythm. You seem to push it louder in the mix due to this burden. I'd say, take something of the rhythm gits shoulders with another git track to the right and mix with the vox a tad more of a presence.

Hope I that helps some,
The vocals and song are really solid!!
Theron.

 

[boydrj]

Not a bad tune at all.

Unfortunately, this did sound a bit distorted on my machine. -- IMHO -- I would bring the drums up a bit in the mix. They sounded a little overpowered by the guitars. The vocals sounded really good throughout and I liked when you brought in the harmony vocal.

Nice guitar playing and good chord progression.

Overall a good recording with maybe just a little tweaking needed.

 

[jamal buchet]

ok i read a few people "mention"..how they didnt appreciate people "bumping their own post back to the top...so now i have bbecome a little self concious about this...anyway since it wasnt me i guess ill take this opp to respond to youse people now!!

kramer:..thnks for listening to this crap TWICE man thats more than i expect of people..however i do have an ulterior motive ....to rule the whole world of rock...and stuff..

g.t....."its fantastic".....what could i possibly add to that??..THANKS!!!!!

king elvis....uuhh UHHHuhhh:..why wont anyone beleive this...I PLAYES THE DRUMS LIVE ON A ELEC DRUMSET...lol(i promise i could never program anything close to that. but hey if it will drive anyone wild im all for that!!..all my stuff thus far has been recorded direct and yes i hate the sound too..just a little short on cash for the new upgradelol

museman....wait aminute you actually BELEIVE im playing those drums?!?!..(naa i am)...and the best to you too man!

fed: you know i think that switching levels..vocals/guitar..is adamn good idea...does anyone actually like the sound of thier own voice???..

triple m:,,ya im pretty sure the "rapid-fire vocals"..really is the only cool thing on here..but on that point we totally agree i LOVE that part (it was just a pain to rec)...thanks...oh ya i do have a version of this with a diff guitar part thru the chorus but it sorta blew out the vocals,,?

fenderlikingood...i love that namelol....ok dude go back listen to the first version i posted of this...then feel better about yerself..lol trust me it will work!

theron ..man i was waitin around to hear from you..you havent missed one of mine yet..and for some reason you can find all kindsa stuff wrong and STILL make a guy feel better for it..
you know i think this is one of the best songs ive done..i think if i polish it up a bit i could get it played on my local crappy little radio station (always been my dream)

ok thanks to all...and tell all yer freinds at any major labels all about me....(hey i'd do it for you)....later

jamal

 

[Kramer]

ok i read a few people "mention"..how they didnt appreciate people "bumping their own post back to the top...so now i have bbecome a little self concious about this...anyway since it wasnt me i guess ill take this opp to respond to youse people now!!

kramer:..thnks for listening to this crap TWICE man thats more than i expect of people..however i do have an ulterior motive ....to rule the whole world of rock...and stuff..

jamal

It's ok to bump a thread to give thanks,but the ruling the world of rock and stuff......I dont know......that might be a little harder than it was to bump this thread.

 

[Lt. Bob]

Ok the only mix I've heard is the latest one and though there's still a bit of distortion....it must be better than it was 'cause I can ignore it. I like the song a lot. Very energetic and very nice performances. The balances are nice too....it's just that crunchy sound that detracts. Good work though.
BTW.....Kramer's right....it's perfectly OK to thank people who comment even if it bumps your post....in fact, it's mostly expected that you'll respond to those who comment on your tunes.