Wrote and recorded in 3 hours, Opinions please

[jeff0633]

Thanks. Did this sitting on my bed.

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[squibble94]

The guitar tones sound great, but they could be a bit brighter. Also, the double tracking isn't that tight. Nice mellow song though

 

[Bulls Hit]

Too many lows in the mix. You could high pass the vocals and accoustic. Good tune

 

[brzoza21]

Nice song, I like your vocal and guitar sound. Keep it up