Winter - new hard spacey alternative tune - comments puhleaze?

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Well, I've finally done it. I've hit 40 individual tracks for the first time, not including any buses or groups. Probably 50+ counting those. I'm sure lots of you guys have hit way more, but that's the most I've had yet. Getting to the point where I'm having an entire track for a single chord or note. But hey...it's ridiculously fun or I wouldn't be doing it. Let me know your thoughts on this one? Low end, in particular?

Looking forward to the butchery!

https://soundcloud.com/andrushkiwt/winter
 
I really think your mix sounds good. And its a very cool song also.

I just think that you could bring the bass up a little bit.
 
My standard disclaimer, listening to this on a home stereo.

Really good mix. Kick had good sounds, all instruments seemed to be in their place. Bass could use some boosting. What I heard of it, sounded like it would really help give the song some foundation.

Sounds like you are dialing in not just your mixes but your sound as well.
 
Really cool song for your collection. Bass up just a touch is my only comment. Good job.
 
DM60 said:
Sounds like you are dialing in not just your mixes but your sound as well.
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funny, I thought the same thing yesterday when finishing it up. Really. Thanks for the comment
 
Bruthish said:
Really cool song for your collection. Bass up just a touch is my only comment. Good job.
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I agree with you guys about the bass. My car played a different story this morning, and I also thought the guitars sounded a little thin. I might have cut too much. Thanks Bruthish
 
I didn't hear the first version, but bass and kick sound good now - maybe take the bass down a tiny bit in volume during the 'verse' (quieter part).
 
Yea, I agree with MJ, bring the bass down just a tad. I could live with what you have, but bringing it down would get it into the sweet spot.

Really good song.
 
nice song ...



just as an experiment raise the pitch of your vocals a few cents and see how they sit ;)
 
cakewalkKaKed said:
nice song ...



just as an experiment raise the pitch of your vocals a few cents and see how they sit ;)
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I'm going to do this in the session later...what is it youre thinking? I thought I read somewhere awhile back it gives it some kind of edge...yeah? Is this done often on radio?
 
The bass could come down a tiny tiny bit in the sparser sections but when stuff is happening you need it as is. The vocal & vocla style sound familiar - possibly Placeboish?
I'd like some harder guitars in the busy section as everything seems to wash around too much without focus.
Good song!
 
rayc said:
The bass could come down a tiny tiny bit in the sparser sections but when stuff is happening you need it as is. The vocal & vocla style sound familiar - possibly Placeboish?
I'd like some harder guitars in the busy section as everything seems to wash around too much without focus.
Good song!
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Hey, don't know the group. You can PM me and I'll check them out though! I guess 30STM was close to what I was going for? Sonically. Washy huh? That's not good. The chorus has 8 total guitars. One pair light dist, one pair heavy dist, one pair leads, one pair of the same guitar used in the verse that mimics the lead. So two chord chuggers and two leads. The Washy sound is probably coming from the verse guitar playing lead. It's easier to hear what that guitar is doing in the verse; lots of swirling and rhythmic pans. Good to know the heaviness of it didn't translate as well as I imagined. Thanks man
 
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