Wildboy (video) Let me know what you think of my directing.

[wmsproductions]

Wildboy (video) Let me know what you think of my directing.
Still kind of new at it producing is my main craft

Q (Brainstorm Ent) "Wildboy" Directed by The Sultan - YouTube

 

[RawDepth]

Good work. It looks like it was a lot of editing. Cool lighting too. I like the "car headlight" appearance in some scenes. It works great for that setting.

I've always felt that the video itself should tell a story apart from the song. If you muted the audio and only watched the video, the sequence of scenes should at least provide some rough sort of storyline, no matter how simple. This can be done through the subject or the changing backgrounds. Perhaps make them go somewhere and do something, even if unrelated to the song. Then it would be twice as interesting.

Again, fine job, man. You're off to a good start. Don't stop now.

 

[wmsproductions]

Thanks, great words of wisdom. I like this part

"If you muted the audio and only watched the video, the sequence of scenes should at least provide some rough sort of storyline, no matter how simple. This can be done through the subject or the changing backgrounds."


Good advice I will use going forward

 

[talk midway]

nice mash_up with the tyson footage

 

[wmsproductions]

Thanks, I might do something like that with Jordan footage just need to find the right song.

 

[zonshti]

wow - nice job!, As this is rap i think if you put at least some of the lyrics in the video that would help follow the rap more easily

 

[wmsproductions]

Thanks man I def appreciate all the feedback

 

[daffodil255]

Good work. It looks like it was a lot of editing. Cool lighting too. I like the "car headlight" appearance in some scenes. It works great for that setting.

I've always felt that the video itself should tell a story apart from the song. If you muted the audio and only watched the video, the sequence of scenes should at least provide some rough sort of storyline, no matter how simple. This can be done through the subject or the changing backgrounds. Perhaps make them go somewhere and do something, even if unrelated to the song. Then it would be twice as interesting.

Again, fine job, man. You're off to a good start. Don't stop now.

Thanks you for the post.

 

[wmsproductions]

Thanks you for the post.

yeppp more on the way