The song is commented to death. So is the recording. The pitch. Everything.
So is the shitthrowing against you Dragon. I'm sorry for that.
But coming in here with such an attitude won't get you anywhere. You know; people who have posted 100, 1000 or 4500 posts (geez what do they do for a livin?) all of a sudden becomes a brotherhood when a noob walks into this forum with a crappy recording and starts off the way you did. There is no use trying to beat these guys in words or insults. Your insults might be better; but who cares - you are flooded. And this forum shouldn't be about the best insults, it should be about the best music, mixes and fun you can have. And about learning. Getting inputs.
Let go of the fact that there are people sitting all day at these forums, letting their everyday boredom or anger metamorph into a shitty post or forty here. Face it. Thats the way it is.
When you learn to know the members a tad better, you will see that there are many, many members here that speaks up only when they have something weighty to say. Something that might as well put you back on ground, who knows what their feedback will be. But these posters has the gift of not posting to try to boost a superego or kill a newcomer, even though he is a tad bigmouted.
Stop fighting the windmills Don, and join this forum also with your future work. If you ignore some of the worst posters feedback you will be fine.
I really think a feedback should let you know whats bad, but hey - a feedback that doesn't give you a hint of what to improve ain't much worth in my eyes.
Many of us post our music here coz we are proud of it, whatever the level. And we want some feedback.
If there is at all something positive to say about a preview song; say it. Don't forget to give them all the bad news, but geez; try to be a tad more educational eh?
Good luck everyone - here and with your music.
Today - thats my 0.02 $