Jig,
I like the group name. So you want advice on how to make "Boom Town" tighter.
Well, the vocals are unintelligible more often than not so I would raise the levels there or lower the track. Also it sounds like you have some sort of pad instrument sustaining a note throughout the song that is competing with the vocals, I would get rid of that as it doesn't really add anything.
I would consider more of a consistent bass line and adding some more low end to the kick. The 808 boom you have going is cool but is too low to cover the midbass territory. The kick and bassline changes I suggested should remedy this.
Maybe add some more changes and/or drops to keep the track interesting. Other than like, I like the flows and percussion you have going on. Nice work.
Stray