I like the groove. Around 40 seconds there are some chops in the vocals that sound a bit akward. The vocals also cause some clipping (such as around 1:20). I think overall the vocals could actually come down a db or 2.
I think I would really love to hear some "warmth" in this mix. Maybe I'm looking for some bass frequencies? Also, are the vocals too far in the mix? they could be brought a bit forward in my opinion (it could be the reverb that is pushing the vocals so far back in the mix instead of it being forward). I could be wrong. It's a nice song !
I haven't been here for a while now. This recording is good...a vast improvement over the recordings you were
posting when you first started posting here. You've learned a lot and your recent recording show it.