Two To Show: New Video

[arcadeko]

Here is the new version




Lotsa editing in this one.

EDIT: I found some more footage on another camera and decided to edit this again to change up some of the flow and make it less repetitious - so this is the first version. Am working on the second one now...

If you have any suggestions would love to hear them.




yeah I already posted it in prime time... so?

 

[arcadeko]

New version

 

[heatmiser]

Awesome!

I like the new version sooo much better. Well done.

I still like the opening location, but the addition of the new bits really helps to break it up a lot and add interest. I think I actually like some of the new footage the best. I can't believe you were able to make such drastic changes so fast. Cool.

I'm not a big fan of the whirlpool effect personally, but it seems like maybe you toned that down some this time around?

 

[arcadeko]

Awesome!

I like the new version sooo much better. Well done.

I still like the opening location, but the addition of the new bits really helps to break it up a lot and add interest. I think I actually like some of the new footage the best. I can't believe you were able to make such drastic changes so fast. Cool.

I'm not a big fan of the whirlpool effect personally, but it seems like maybe you toned that down some this time around?

Thanks Heat! Yeah I removed some of the swirls and replaced them with some other transitions. Some of that footage was on another camera I had set up and I forgot about it after I got so heavy into editing the main footage. And the face on the wall I originally wanted to do with just eyes and a mouth in the wall (like that little talking orange) but I can't do complex masks with Vegas HD 11, (for complex masking I need the pro version which is like $400 instead of $50) -

After I got the face on the wall, it reminded me of the Obey posters, so I threw that in too... It was a fun video to make. I would like to get another (better) camera - I'm using a little Kodak play sport camera (looks like a cell phone, but it shoots 1080p).

I'm thinking after I make about ten of these I should get pretty good at it

Thanks for the feedback.

- Here's some art