Two new songs

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Well,

I had to make it somewhat audible...
I promise...I'll work harder next time :)
 
Misunderstandin

Kid, I wasn't talking about what gospel said at all.

Gospel, If you thought that, sorry.

I was just saying that the whole thing defineately got people talkin.

-ok
 
Re: Misunderstandin

okobd said:
Kid, I wasn't talking about what gospel said at all.

Gospel, If you thought that, sorry.

I was just saying that the whole thing defineately got people talkin.

-ok
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I knew what you were talking about. You know how women are. Just kidding.
 
*INNOCENCE BUMP*

I just saw this thread... (and I'm catching up).

I AM NOT "SUPER_CRITIC," or "AMAZING_CRITIC" or any other critical troll, lol. I vehemently deny the allegations, although I resent nobody for making them; it happens when some cock sucker throws the board into disarray.

See, that's how you deal with it.

bdbdbuck's kid - I'll gladly offer my amateur opinions in just a bit.
 
Hey man...not a bad effort; I haven't read the whole thread, and my monitors are blown, so I'm kinda' useless, but in my opinion, you're GOING to be a good writer. This song is not "great," and you may hate me for saying that, but I think when you listen to this in a couple of years, you'll agree, b/c you've got potential as a writer, I think.

Are there 2 vocalists on here? (don't laugh, these headphones suck)...

Anyway, my biggest crit with the song itself is not lyrical, it's that it doesn't really seem to "open up" during the choruses...It's hard to make a tune really dynamic with just an acoustic guitar, but still...I'm just not getting a big enough change from the verses to the chorus.

Don't hate me.
 
"Two Night Stand"

Inference: You want "song" comments, not "technical" comments.

Haven't read other comments (trying to hit more threads tonite)... so...

Ok... pumpy guitar thing... ha! Didn't realize BDBDBUCK's kid was female :p Nice voice. Pretty good vocal performance.

You're singing and playing at the same time?

There are some technical issues ... compression is the big one... but surely someone else in this thread has mentioned that.

The song didn't spark with me on first listen; maybe the tracking issues in this case would help the song in that it would bear repeated listens. In other words, some better tracking, more listens.... and then it may break thru to people like me (clinic dumdums :))

Good job and keep coming back


Chad
 
Checked out Two Night stand. Cool song, loved the gritty accoustic and thought the playing was great. Good presentation all around.

Very articulate voice. I liked the singing overall. The chorus hook threw me a bit.

Doug
 
Wow!

Thanks Guys!!! I didn't know this thread was still alive!
Chris, thanks for the support!!! I do have to say that this song "No Turnin Round" tends to grab people quicker than my other stuff. With all of the cliches, it almost makes me irk!!! Especially since I have to play/hear it all the time now. I hope to do some new and better recordings of my other stuff to post (that decision was made after much reluctance imposed by the critique of our favorite Critic). I am taking my time through.
Oh, and get yourself some new monitors :)
Participant, thanks for your feedback and welcome to the board (belated)
Doug, thanks for listening to "Two Night Stand" I personally like the song and don't think it has gotten enough attention. The recording was pretty bad, but I will get around to fixing it eventually.
:) :) :)
Take it easy!
 
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