wilko
Marking my territory
Megaman said:
"Takes me down" reminds me a lot of AC/DC. It is a good foot tapping rock and roll track with a rock guitar solo. I preferred this one to "Gonna get hard". I still couldn't make out all the lyrics and I am not sure the voice is ummmm.... powerful enough to compete with the guitars. I'd like to see the lyrics - can you post them?
All in all, it got my foot tapping and that has got to be good!
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Megaman
New member
Nah the voice is me. Everytime I write a song the band wants to hear it finished then make suggestions but it won't be me singing when it gets recorded again and it'll have live drums instead of the drum machine
Lyrics:
I got arms going numb
Got things out of place
There's prophets at my front door
That bluffed me out of my ace
She never stays too long she'll leave you when she's done
Cruisin' on the highway headin' for the sun
Takes me down
Turns me around
With all I've seen I'm running out of steam
The girl's got a rhythm I ain't never seen
Takes me down
Waiting on the secon floor
Elevator's out of order
Lost my breathe coming down the stairs
And couldn't make it to the border
She never stays too long she'll leave you when she's done
You'll be feeling lonely but you're better off alone
Takes me down
Turns me around
With all I've seen I'm running out of steam
The girl's got a rhythm I ain't never seen
Takes me down
Lyrics:
I got arms going numb
Got things out of place
There's prophets at my front door
That bluffed me out of my ace
She never stays too long she'll leave you when she's done
Cruisin' on the highway headin' for the sun
Takes me down
Turns me around
With all I've seen I'm running out of steam
The girl's got a rhythm I ain't never seen
Takes me down
Waiting on the secon floor
Elevator's out of order
Lost my breathe coming down the stairs
And couldn't make it to the border
She never stays too long she'll leave you when she's done
You'll be feeling lonely but you're better off alone
Takes me down
Turns me around
With all I've seen I'm running out of steam
The girl's got a rhythm I ain't never seen
Takes me down
Garry Sharp
Lost Cause
Yeah, Take Me is gonna rock, once you get the right singer on it and you re track / mix with more ear friendly guitar EQ
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azraelswings
New member
wilko said:
I was trying to figure out why I didn't like the vox, think you put your finger on it very nicely.
Not a style I'd likely listen, but I certainly wouldn't switch the station on this tune either. Keep it up, it'll be really good with a polished cut.