Thought people MIGHT want to see this!!

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I worked hard on these videos, and I hope you like my music, be sure to subscribe if you do!! Really appreciate ANY feedback whatsoever!!

-DannyP



 
Nice videos.


You're good. But I do have some critiques.

On the first video, it was very repetitive. The entire song sounded the same. Try modulating some phrases. Mix it up!


You're rapping is almost grade A. I would recommend you sound angrier when you record. Seriously, belt out those words with anger or some high emotion, because as of right now, it sounds like your spewing out some rhymes. And don't get me wrong, the flow is nice, but it's not energetic enough.
 
Hey man, i REALLY appreciate the honesty, and yea, A Normal Day happens to be the first track I ever recorded, so yes, definitely I have worked on throwing out my emotions more! But overall, thanks so much for letting me know what's up!!

-DannyP
 
No problem. The double post is common around here.


By the way, that is a thick watch! Mind telling me what watch that is? :D
 
I'll move this thread over to the Video forum....


...and I'll check it later tonight.
 
It's a white Casio G-Shock!

Here's my newest addition to the music video family!!

 
Ah, I see you cross-posted. No need to do that. Just pick one forum and post there. This belongs in the video forum and seeing that you had a reply already, I deleted the other thread you started.
 
The latest song is the best out of all of them. It can still be more energetic, but you're getting there.
 
Chili said:
Ah, I see you cross-posted. No need to do that. Just pick one forum and post there. This belongs in the video forum and seeing that you had a reply already, I deleted the other thread you started.
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Have you re-modded Chili? I must have missed the press release... :D
 
Armistice said:
Have you re-modded Chili? I must have missed the press release... :D
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No press release, sorry. Yes, I'm back to helping out the site. Consider this my annoucement, let's see how many people respond... (and give this newbie some views on his videos. I'd like to see more videos on this site!!!! :D )
 
:D Sneaky Irish Pirate.

I noticed it a little while back.
 
you have really good flow. the production is not my cup of tea. i tend to like gritty production, but it works for what you are doing. i agree with the need for more energy. but seriously keep up the good work! kudos on putting yourself out there.
 
you have really good flow. the production is not my cup of tea. i tend to like gritty production, but it works for what you are doing. i agree with the need for more energy. but seriously keep up the good work! kudos on putting yourself out there.
 
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