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dezbert
New member
I worked hard on these videos, and I hope you like my music, be sure to subscribe if you do!! Really appreciate ANY feedback whatsoever!!
-DannyP
-DannyP
CrowsofFritz
Flamingo!
Nice videos.
You're good. But I do have some critiques.
On the first video, it was very repetitive. The entire song sounded the same. Try modulating some phrases. Mix it up!
You're rapping is almost grade A. I would recommend you sound angrier when you record. Seriously, belt out those words with anger or some high emotion, because as of right now, it sounds like your spewing out some rhymes. And don't get me wrong, the flow is nice, but it's not energetic enough.
You're good. But I do have some critiques.
On the first video, it was very repetitive. The entire song sounded the same. Try modulating some phrases. Mix it up!
You're rapping is almost grade A. I would recommend you sound angrier when you record. Seriously, belt out those words with anger or some high emotion, because as of right now, it sounds like your spewing out some rhymes. And don't get me wrong, the flow is nice, but it's not energetic enough.
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dezbert
New member
Hey man, i REALLY appreciate the honesty, and yea, A Normal Day happens to be the first track I ever recorded, so yes, definitely I have worked on throwing out my emotions more! But overall, thanks so much for letting me know what's up!!
-DannyP
-DannyP
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dezbert
New member
sry for double post.
CrowsofFritz
Flamingo!
No problem. The double post is common around here.
By the way, that is a thick watch! Mind telling me what watch that is?
By the way, that is a thick watch! Mind telling me what watch that is?
Chili
Site Moderator
I'll move this thread over to the Video forum....
...and I'll check it later tonight.
...and I'll check it later tonight.
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dezbert
New member
It's a white Casio G-Shock!
Here's my newest addition to the music video family!!
Here's my newest addition to the music video family!!
Chili
Site Moderator
Ah, I see you cross-posted. No need to do that. Just pick one forum and post there. This belongs in the video forum and seeing that you had a reply already, I deleted the other thread you started.
CrowsofFritz
Flamingo!
The latest song is the best out of all of them. It can still be more energetic, but you're getting there.
Armistice
Son of Yoda
Chili
Site Moderator
Have you re-modded Chili? I must have missed the press release...
No press release, sorry. Yes, I'm back to helping out the site. Consider this my annoucement, let's see how many people respond... (and give this newbie some views on his videos. I'd like to see more videos on this site!!!!
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moresound
Loud Sun Studios
Sneaky Irish Pirate.I noticed it a little while back.
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Pterofractyl
New member
you have really good flow. the production is not my cup of tea. i tend to like gritty production, but it works for what you are doing. i agree with the need for more energy. but seriously keep up the good work! kudos on putting yourself out there.
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Pterofractyl
New member
you have really good flow. the production is not my cup of tea. i tend to like gritty production, but it works for what you are doing. i agree with the need for more energy. but seriously keep up the good work! kudos on putting yourself out there.
