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Heya Jerry--I like the song-it moves along well- I like songs that use a cliched phrase, in this case the whole "hard to get" hook is easy to remember and instantly recognizable.
The other guys mentioned eq problems hmmm, I guess they mean it doesnt have a real professional sound, but to me it has its own kinda charm. Hows that for diplomatic? Anyway-if I could change anything I'd lose that doubling effect on the vocals-sometimes it worked but it got a little annoying at times too. Is this finished? I'm not sure if I heard a bass and a chugging (not booze) electric guitar would help in my opinion. See ya
Edited:Think I been drinkin I listened to the wrong song! Wow this one is way different heh. I like the main vocal-definetely some wierd shite goin on. I didnt care for the spoken "interlude" and some of the keyboards were way out sounding as well as jumping way out of your mix heh. I like the overall groove of the song-thats a good bass groove to work over-reminds me of van morrison "astral weeks" if he was a Georgia Bulldog and uuuuh ...drunk yeah. Lower some of them keyboards!
Strat