the needle (intro song to my album)

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this is the intro track from my album FRACTURED EMOTIONALITIES and i just want some tips on what i should do to make it better. im pissed because we lost all of the vocals to it, so in order to mix it more we have to re record them, which is a pain in the ass. here it is so far:
 
wow, you like reverb?

I don't even know how to comment on electronic music. I don't listen to it so it's hard to know how it's supposed to sound. but this sounds alright to me. the mix sounds balanced and nothing sounds out of place.
 
wow, you like reverb?

I don't even know how to comment on electronic music. I don't listen to it so it's hard to know how it's supposed to sound. but this sounds alright to me. the mix sounds balanced and nothing sounds out of place.

you mean the reverb on the vocals at the begining?
 
I am in no way a expert or implying I could do as good or better so take these comments as just a listeners view.

Seemed like it needs more thump? The drums and music seemed thin. Like when that main vocal came in, it all seemed flat...the vibe I got from the lyrics is that verse should explode sonically?

Does that make sense? Just a thought.
 
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