The challenge: Write the lyric nearly entirely from pick up lines

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Cool song, dawg. Seems like it should be really funny if it's all pick up lines, but it just doesn't seem cheesy enough I guess. It needs to be way more sleazy LMAO...
 
FoulPhil said:
Cool song, dawg. Seems like it should be really funny if it's all pick up lines, but it just doesn't seem cheesy enough I guess. It needs to be way more sleazy LMAO...
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That's EXACTLY what my wife said. Yet it's a fine edge I tried to walk ... mildly funny w/o being too far over the top ... for I thought it would take the song into novelty land (where I didn't want to go).
 
Yeah I guess that's what I was expecting, for it to be more of a novelty song which would of been fine. You should try it just for kicks LOL. It'll probably be fun :P
 
Yeah, I was expecting worse pickup lines too. They can be sleazy and funny without being too dirty.

Examples:

Did it hurt when you fell from Heaven?
Your father must have been a bank robber because you've stolen my heart.
Your legs must be tired because you've been running around my mind all day.
Is that a mirror in your pocket because I could see myself in your pants. (Ok that one's a little dirty.)
How do you like your eggs in the morning scrambled or... HOLD ON! THAT ONE'S FILTHY!!!

Otherwise, enunciation was a bit of an issue. I was only half listening, but I couldn't make out half the lyrics.

Pretty cool song overall though.
 
There was also:

Great legs! What time do they open?
You seem to have something on your chest -- wait, they're my eyes.

I decided to play it relatively safe ... :)

The closest I got was one I found funny --

Please screw me
if I am wrong,
but really ...
haven't we both met before?
 
my face is leaving in five minutes...be on it!



funny song K :)
 
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