All in all, you did it serious justice. I'm not a big fan of the vocal phrasing in "You never give me your money". It's a bit too "off timing" for my taste - but it is a matter of style, not execution.
To be clear, the original was done by the masters - so any attempt at replication is going to be a lesser comparison by virtue of the nature of the work and with whom the comparison is made.
Still - well crafted - and most of the nits I might have are merely rough spots (harsh cymbals etc ... that could be smoothed) that are minor only.