I tried another hand at this song. It's shorter now. There's obvious timing mistakes. I'll have to fix those.
There's a buzzing from the guitar on some chords (a string-fret buzz). It sounds very apart from the vocals, which are pretty cool!
Yeah, it's interesting. I like it. No mix comments, cuz it all fits at this point.
LIKE it, the split vox are cool.
Very interesting! I enjoyed it....a little static around 1:28 thats coming through...may be from the mixdown. Great job