Time Ticks Away

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Hi

Here is a new song i have done
Tried to create a soul funky feel

Time Ticks Away

Thanks for taking the time to listen

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[TalismanRich]

I think you could back off the reverb on the vocal on this one. It makes it sound hollow.

Otherwise, it's pretty good. it had a bit of a Gloria Gaynor feel to me.

 

[johny_r]

Agree with TalismanRich, the vocal sounds distant from the band, not blended in. I'd also back off with the kick drum. A bit too much for me. Otherwise sounds good to me.

 

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Hi @TalismanRich @johny_r

Thanks for listening & your comments
i have backed off the reverb & tamed the Kick

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