tell me what you think

[ollie99]

Hi
this is a song I wrote and made as my dad's christmas present. I had no idea what to call it so I went for plain and simple "christmas".
Please comment on it and feel free to ask any questions.

 

[CrowsofFritz]

Your beginnning lead guitar is a little out of tune on some notes.


It sounds kinda funny when you hit the snare repeatedly in the middle of the song, though I do like the tones of the drums. And I don't like that note as well.


Over all, I think it's a pretty cool composition. I would definitely add lyrics and vocals to this if it were mine. Nothing about Christmas though. I think it's cool as hell. I could never get a great band song going. I'm only a solo composer, really.


Nice tune!

 

[ollie99]

Your beginnning lead guitar is a little out of tune on some notes.


It sounds kinda funny when you hit the snare repeatedly in the middle of the song, though I do like the tones of the drums. And I don't like that note as well.


Over all, I think it's a pretty cool composition. I would definitely add lyrics and vocals to this if it were mine. Nothing about Christmas though. I think it's cool as hell. I could never get a great band song going. I'm only a solo composer, really.


Nice tune!

Cheers I forgot to mention actually I only had 12 days to make it and the last 3 I was very ill so only 9 really so it isn't perfect. The drums are all samples so I'm glad you like them
The only problem with vocals is that I can't sing for my life! I couldn't really pull anyone in with such short notice so I didn't have much choice.
And yeah, no idea what to call it but it's for a christmas present and I had no other idea haha.
This song is actually very different to anything I normally compose because my dad specifically requested for not my usual "thrashy crap" hahaha!

 

[Manslick]

I think with the right video treatment this would make a nice Christmas song because of the dramatic switches.

Some nice guitar tones.

But as always... needs more cowbell.

 

[ollie99]

I think with the right video treatment this would make a nice Christmas song because of the dramatic switches.

Some nice guitar tones.

But as always... needs more cowbell.

how about adding a christmas carol to the beginning
thanks