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Hi
this is a song I wrote and made as my dad's christmas present. I had no idea what to call it so I went for plain and simple "christmas".
Please comment on it and feel free to ask any questions.
 
Your beginnning lead guitar is a little out of tune on some notes.


It sounds kinda funny when you hit the snare repeatedly in the middle of the song, though I do like the tones of the drums. And I don't like that note as well. :p


Over all, I think it's a pretty cool composition. I would definitely add lyrics and vocals to this if it were mine. Nothing about Christmas though. :D I think it's cool as hell. I could never get a great band song going. I'm only a solo composer, really.


Nice tune!
 
CrowsofFritz said:
Your beginnning lead guitar is a little out of tune on some notes.


It sounds kinda funny when you hit the snare repeatedly in the middle of the song, though I do like the tones of the drums. And I don't like that note as well. :p


Over all, I think it's a pretty cool composition. I would definitely add lyrics and vocals to this if it were mine. Nothing about Christmas though. :D I think it's cool as hell. I could never get a great band song going. I'm only a solo composer, really.


Nice tune!
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Cheers :) I forgot to mention actually I only had 12 days to make it and the last 3 I was very ill so only 9 really so it isn't perfect. The drums are all samples so I'm glad you like them :)
The only problem with vocals is that I can't sing for my life! I couldn't really pull anyone in with such short notice so I didn't have much choice.
And yeah, no idea what to call it but it's for a christmas present and I had no other idea haha.
This song is actually very different to anything I normally compose because my dad specifically requested for not my usual "thrashy crap" hahaha!
 
I think with the right video treatment this would make a nice Christmas song because of the dramatic switches.

Some nice guitar tones.

But as always... needs more cowbell. :)
 
Manslick said:
I think with the right video treatment this would make a nice Christmas song because of the dramatic switches.

Some nice guitar tones.

But as always... needs more cowbell. :)
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how about adding a christmas carol to the beginning :)
thanks
 
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