Tell me what ya think...

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i know the mix is a little rough,but other than that what needs work,whats good,whats bad,etc. the songs called "broken down"

www.garageband.com/eightygrit


as you know,it sounds much better downloading the song if you can,rather than streaming it.

thanks!
 
Pretty good! It sounded like a cross between Big Wreck and Aerosmith. Very professional pop rock songwriting.

Can't comment on the mix since it only streamed at 80Kbps. Can't see how to download it. Must be some garageband thing. I think you have to qualify and be reviewed and all sorts of shit...I've never been a big fan of that.

Anyhow, good job. Let us know when you can provide a 128kbps link (or where it is if I'm missing it).

Slackmaster 2000
 
i cant get it to work at all... not even the stream,hmmm...
 
Well written and performed song. The vocal was a little lost in the mix at times, although this is partly a performance issue; I would let it go more and use less of the grumble style. I liked the lead guitar sound and riff a lot; rhthym guitar tone was good but substance was very standardized. Lyrics could use work. I streamed it also but the production seemed real good. Nice band.
 
thanks!

no band,its just me writing,and another guy playing drums,who isnt even a drummer. i just had a hard time getting used to it,because its so different than my other stuff. the vocal tack is actually the "scratch track" i decided to keep out of laziness. believe it or not the HARDEST part of songwriting for me,is the lyrics,i always feel theyre corny. thanks alot for the kind words!

jager
 
oh yeah....

LI Slim,what did you mean by "grumble style". do you mean how raspy my voice is?

thanks
 
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