What is this type of music? Punk/alternative?
I am not familair with it, so it is really hard for me to judge it, but I can try to help.
I love the intro. Strong guitar tone.
The vocals timing need work. Is the vocalist supposed to sound off-key? If so, then it is good, if not, then a bit of work on voice control.
The drums aren't bad, but the cymbals are actually sounding more noise, than distinct sound, in a lot of areas.
As I have said, this is not my area, but no one had offered to help yet, so I did. Sorry if I offended you.
It is not a bad song or recording, I just think it needs some work perhaps.
Or maybe I just am talking out my ass?
