Techno-ishy you like?

[robertmunch]

Hey I just finished this, im probally still going to switch some stuff up and add a few things, and there are few parts that may seem to drag on but that is only because hopefully some lyrics will soon lay there. LMK hat you think.

Link: http://www.box.net/shared/m2vdggo2ae

Cheers,
Brandin

 

[jeffmaher]

Add 'pea-soup' hi-hat. Need something on the 2 and 4's.
Use eighths on the snare double hits....and some grace notes.

A bass part would be nice.

And an actual melodic theme would complete the work.