super super cool new song by me!

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Jordan, please listen to me. If you want to be good (better) at what you do, learn. Don't be afraid to learn. Every brilliant person, at some point had to learn things to get that way. If you ever want to get something that will make people listen, learn how to record, experiment with recording techniques, and don't just assume you know everything. That is the worse thing you can do. Your ego is to big. People tell me I do good work, but I never let it go to my head. You think you're great, but a lot of people seem to think that you are just a big headed amature. When I started, I made some stuff that sounded close to what you have here. I didn't have any patience at all, and would crank out like 3 in a day. Sound familiar? It was only when I understood that you have to take time to do something right, and stop thinking your crap is gold, that I got better. Please take this advise.

-Adam.

*SIGH*

We've all tried Adam, he just won't listen......

I think I'm gonna take RAMI's example, 'cos he's starting to bore me now. Maybe if we all ignored him........
 
heres one i just made! two more left and the album is out! whats tomorrow? it migh.. whoaaa a roach just fell down my back i felt back. tomrrow evening, background sounds vol.2 is out, i will re release vol.1 again at the same time hehe!

shut up you freak21mp33338878taaaama.mp3 - 6.06MB

Shut up you Damn Freak! I Hate you so Fucking Much!
 
and this one i made earlier today, its really nice! its the best one i made all day. i was thinkin of a lot at the time.

give me a hand1mppp3322mtaaaamaaaaaa.mp3 - 5.68MB

Give me a Hand


and passenger airbag, thats good advice. i dont have a big ego, i dont even have an ego, im egoless like the wind! hehe, i know i dont know it all but i really like what i do and i know im workin to make something really special that i go to certain measures to make sure everything is ok. thanks for the caring words :)
 
oh and about the technique i was talkin about earlier, i dont even use it on these tracks!
 
The z-share ones are getting flagged by my anti-virus.

JordanD, are you secretly building a bot net?

Accidentally creating bad music is ok. Intentionally creating bad music but never owning up to it is kind of hilarious. Spreading malware is evil. :D
 
and passenger airbag, thats good advice. i dont have a big ego, i dont even have an ego, im egoless like the wind! hehe, i know i dont know it all but i really like what i do and i know im workin to make something really special that i go to certain measures to make sure everything is ok. thanks for the caring words :)
Hmm. Well Jordan, if you like it, I guess that's what matters. Have we lost site of something we should not have? Is there a wrong way to make music? If this guy is making music, and he feels that it captures what he wants it to, isn't that what it's about? If he is this happy about stuff he has done, and genuinely exited about it, doesn't that matter? Who decided what music is supposed to sound like? Jordan, I am not sure I agree with or like the stuff you record, but I commend you for recording it and not letting people get to you. Do the rest of you know where I am coming from? I appologise.

-Adam.
 
Adam,
It's not Jordan's music or his desire to create that is the problem. People are very tolerant of the levels of sophistication, talent, creativity and such on this forum. I know this because I've benefitted from the ongoing support of many for my rather poor efforts.
Anyone who comes in trumpeting their own glories but NOT listening to, accepting advice from, offering support for, OTHERS will cop a caning.
This isn't the pro music world so I don't accept that excellent music covers for poor behavior/people skills/ or an inability to accept and use constructive criticism - NOR DOES LESS THAN EXCELLENT MUSIC FOR THAT MATTER..

I've edited my post - I typed it just home from work & VERY sunburnt & suffering an alergic reaction to sunscreen (both being weekly events) so my brain was obviously fried - sorry.
 
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Adam,
It's not Jordan's music or his desire to create that is the problem. People are very tolerant of the levels of sophistication, talent, creativity and such on this forum. I know this because I've benefitted from the ongoing support of many for my rather poor efforts.
Anyone who come in trumpetting their own glories but listening to, accepting advice from, offering support for, no-one will cop a caning.
This isn't the pro music world so I don't accept that excellent music covers for poor behavior/people skills/ or an inability to accept and use constructive criticism.
I'm not sure I get what you are saying. The wording is a bit strange. I think I do.

-Adam.
 
I think what it's after is that if JD truly didn't care what people thought, he wouldn't keep posting. I think he just wants the attention, and he doesn't seem to know any other way.

It would be one thing if he came at it humbly and said, "look, I'm an amateur and here's what sounds good to me - help me progress." Instead, every week it's another collection of, "this is the greatest thing I've ever exploded out of my brilliant self." That tends to turn people off, especially when the person making the statement sounds like they're sequencing music for the latest Atari game.
 
I think what it's after is that if JD truly didn't care what people thought, he wouldn't keep posting. I think he just wants the attention, and he doesn't seem to know any other way.

It would be one thing if he came at it humbly and said, "look, I'm an amateur and here's what sounds good to me - help me progress." Instead, every week it's another collection of, "this is the greatest thing I've ever exploded out of my brilliant self." That tends to turn people off, especially when the person making the statement sounds like they're sequencing music for the latest Atari game.
I understand that fully now. Very good point. Or maybe he just thinks he is great, and thinks we would all be better off hearing his stuff. I any case, the statement "exploded out of myself" never gets old. :D

-Adam.
 
you know what.. I think you all are making fun of somebody who just wants to fit in. Im like some people on this thread, when I first started out I was making music just like this. Time.......is what it takes. He will learn and get better. Like I did.. I went from that to this in like 2 years. My music isn't all that great but I have FUN!! www.myspace.com/projectband09
I tried to get people on here to listen to my music. but NO!! everybody wants to make fun of some kid. Its about home recoding!! Just having fun!! with what your doing!!
Hate if you want. I been a fan of this page for years, Not really posting but reading. A Lot of wise people here. That's how I learned. Thanks to all the people who helped.
 
Jordan,

Most of your stuff, in my opinion, will never pass, even with the most obscure music critics, as passable. I really appreciate your apparent passion for your music. But you make everyone, including me, feel a little offended with your cavalier use of the words genius, brilliant or awesome, as we have strived to increase our skills, in music and the recording process.

I remember my first couple posts on this forum, and I was desperate for some constructive criticism from knowledgeable members. You seem to blatantly disregard the advice of accomplished engineers.

While it is your place to post any type of music you want here, it defeats the purpose of posting on the clinic when you are simply posting to post, instead of posting to gain some kind of new knowledge of the recording process.

You may be trying to fuck with everyone, in which case, you have succeeded. But I have heard the music on your myspace and it is all the same. Take constructive criticism or stop posting.

At this point you have become a blatant waste of bandwidth. Stop, or change.

-jD
 
Sorry - I've edited my garbles phrases and mottled spelling. Please refer to my above post for better syntax & taxing sin.
Adamki - he isn't trying to fit in he's trying to stand out THAT'S the difference. he doesn't participate in any significant way except where it relates to his muse & music.
I don't want to be on a forum populated by round pegs anyway - but Jordan's not really contributing to anything except his own stuff - other than as a whipping boy who is, apparently - masochistic.
 
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heres one i just made! two more left and the album is out! whats tomorrow? it migh.. whoaaa a roach just fell down my back i felt back. tomrrow evening, background sounds vol.2 is out, i will re release vol.1 again at the same time hehe!

shut up you freak21mp33338878taaaama.mp3 - 6.06MB

Shut up you Damn Freak! I Hate you so Fucking Much!

Dude. I actually listened to this all the way through.

I will probably never know if you're joking on some strange post-modern level, or if you actually are convinced of your genius.

But all I know is that on some sick level in my brain, I really genuinely enjoyed this song. I don't know if I'll ever listen to anything else you've done, and I would never buy a cd of this, but there was something really catchy in an obscure way.

It reminds me of chiptunes. Look it up if you don't know. Find a forum dedicated to it. You could be a superstar prodigy to those people.

There have been much more avant garde songs that have been called music.

Edit: To be honest with a little adjustment and less "casio" instrumentation it could be a nice little tune.
 
NO ONE should be visiting the site this asshole puts his bullshit on, unless they like viruses. Fortunately, I surf using VMWare so I'm pretty much immune to that crap but for the people who don't(or at least use antivirus software), I do NOT suggest clicking on the link he posted.

JordanD, if you're not a spammer then upload your shit somewhere directly, otherwise !@#% off..
 
NO ONE should be visiting the site this asshole puts his bullshit on, unless they like viruses. Fortunately, I surf using VMWare so I'm pretty much immune to that crap but for the people who don't(or at least use antivirus software), I do NOT suggest clicking on the link he posted.

JordanD, if you're not a spammer then upload your shit somewhere directly, otherwise !@#% off..

zshare is brass, but then when i put it on limelinx, people have even more problems hearing it! any recomendations.

james, i have like 4 or 5 totally distinct styles of music that i make. this is just one! i hadn't done it for years but im back!

you guys scare me sometimes, you are so bent on breaking me down, i dont know! i feel like im on my way to be a secret that you dont want me to have!
 
zshare is brass, but then when i put it on limelinx, people have even more problems hearing it! any recomendations.

james, i have like 4 or 5 totally distinct styles of music that i make. this is just one! i hadn't done it for years but im back!

you guys scare me sometimes, you are so bent on breaking me down, i dont know! i feel like im on my way to be a secret that you dont want me to have!

Piss or get off the pot. You know what SoundClick is; use it or take your shit somewhere else.
 
especially when the person making the statement sounds like they're sequencing music for the latest Atari game.

hey dont diss on the atari 4 bit bass is pretty amazing stuff actully, but im an 8bit person myself by nature. If you can't say it in 8 bits it proably is better off unsaid and thats the truth
 
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