Hmm..Wookey's post was a bit harsh, but he has a point. Lyrics without music are considerably less than half the story; this is not a poetry forum and anyway lyrics are not poetry.
I don't think that the MP3 clinic is the total answer - people should be able to post songs here knowing that production isn't up to scratch but get comments just on the songwriting.
(Toker I tried to listen but nowhere is having one of its periodic battles with Media Player. Sorry Will try again over the weekend when I can be bothered to clear the temporary files that cause the problem.)