pipelineaudio
Well-known member
please, I beg of you!
All day long I record rappers who rap about rapping. Seriously! Please examine your raps, and see if you are rapping about rapping more than 10% or so of the time.
I mean, I dont see metal bands with EVERY song going " yeah were a metal band
we play meatl
metal is what we play
cuz we play metal
I play metal on my guitar
with my guitar I play metal
yeah yeah and we play metal better than you
cuz you dont play metal like we play metal
our crew is metal
your crew isnt metal
were more metal
"
sounds STUPID doesnt it?
STOP DOING THE SAME DAMN THING
please
All day long I record rappers who rap about rapping. Seriously! Please examine your raps, and see if you are rapping about rapping more than 10% or so of the time.
I mean, I dont see metal bands with EVERY song going " yeah were a metal band
we play meatl
metal is what we play
cuz we play metal
I play metal on my guitar
with my guitar I play metal
yeah yeah and we play metal better than you
cuz you dont play metal like we play metal
our crew is metal
your crew isnt metal
were more metal
"
sounds STUPID doesnt it?
STOP DOING THE SAME DAMN THING
please

. Can you write poetry? 'Coz they're really quite similar (2pac anyone?) - if you can write a good poem, you can write a good rap - you just need to put it to a beat, however if you're a good rap-writer you're not necessarily a good poet 'coz you can get away with a lot as your words are important but the vocals are too (way it is spit on the beat, etc.), unlike poetry which relies on words. A good way to improve is to try to use different words rather than the obvious rhymes - use more interesting words that are maybe less commonly used. Anyone can do it if they want to - jut keep tryin', differences can actually appear in relatively short spaces of time, believe me.