Something old im not to happy with "sawteeth"

[emser]

Can you please help me with this really old song?
The thing is, im not happy with it but i dont know what im not happy with.(makes sense?)

Anyway, comments on "sawteeth" please.

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=4384/singles

/emser

 

[Stratomaster]

I like the song--Nice vocals, decent melody, nice musical hooks, cool background vocals-good chorus. Sound quality wise--the drums seem a little out front and kinda muffled, almost like a phasey/flangey sound on them...Vocals sounded a little too outfront/dry to me...The chorus was stronger than the verse--alot that could be done vocal wise during the verse, melody and delivery wise, but it kept kinda laid-back...Alot of good musical hooks-I wish they were accentuated more, mix-wise, or arrangement wise by dropping parts in and out so they stand out more....Anyways I'm rambling, I really like the style...

 

[v6v6v6]

hey, emser,

aside from the fact that it's not as "clean" sounding compared to your other stuff (drums a little muddy, esp. at beginning), i think it's a nice slow groove. i'm not really into the "laser" sound at 1:12, 1:19, etc. the guitar riff in the background at 2:53, 3:01, etc. (the top one) sounds a bit sharp? sorry i can't be more technical...