Love the song and the Bowie feel !
I think there's a problem with the low instruments fighting for space and robbing the clairity. I would start with bass against the kick and low toms.
Just my 2 cents .. Still Nice .. mark
But everything is fighting for space. The vocals are competing with the guitars. The bass and kick are competing for low end. The guitars are fighting each other. etc.
Love the song and the Bowie feel !
I think there's a problem with the low instruments fighting for space and robbing the clairity. I would start with bass against the kick and low toms.
Just my 2 cents .. Still Nice .. mark
But everything is fighting for space. The vocals are competing with the guitars. The bass and kick are competing for low end. The guitars are fighting each other. etc.
The song is pretty good, but I agree that the bass is overwhelming stuff. The mix seems awfully dark to me. There's not a lot of top end on the voices or snap on the drums, at least on my JBL308s.