Rerecorded vocals to an old song

[strat0tele]

I recorded this song a while ago but I thought it deserved better vocals (aka not as off pitch)

I think they are much better this time around, although I dont' have the original to compare with. I made sure I destroyed it.

(Lyrics are in jest if you can't figure out by title.)

 

[jake-owa]

The way the guitars drop out and come back in is not appealing in this type of music at all. The vocal is ok I suppose but could still be better. The canned drum sounds....well...

I'm gonna leave the rest alone.

 

[r4m]

Vox sound thin and distant. Not bad singing (for the style) from what I can hear. Song is pretty cool.

 

[strat0tele]

The way the guitars drop out and come back in is not appealing in this type of music at all. The vocal is ok I suppose but could still be better. The canned drum sounds....well...

I'm gonna leave the rest alone.

What type of music is this that I cannot drop out guitars?

 

[jake-owa]

I didn't say you cannot. The way they come in and out has not reason, it's distracting from the rock vibe in this tune IN MY OPINION.

 

[strat0tele]

I didn't say you cannot. The way they come in and out has not reason, it's distracting from the rock vibe in this tune IN MY OPINION.

It does have reason, I have two guitars one lower and one higher that comes in after a line. I understand what you're saying. I don't know, I like how it did it. Thanks for the comments though!

 

[Halion]

Not bad I'd add some highs to the guitars (3k to 8k)

 

[strat0tele]

What reason is that? I would go with panning them instead. It would smooth it out alittle more.

They are panned. Just not completely 100% each way.

 

[livilaNic]

They are panned. Just not completely 100% each way.

My bad. I hear it now. One is semi-one sided the other is kinda semi-centered? I dunno somethings wrong with it. Can't put my finger on it.

Just started mixing shit myself. So don't mind my ignorance

 

[strat0tele]

My bad. I hear it now. One is semi-one sided the other is kinda semi-centered? I dunno somethings wrong with it. Can't put my finger on it.

Just started mixing shit myself. So don't mind my ignorance

Both are panned I believe 60% each way but the one is louder, giving the appearance of it probably sounding more center.