Really old trance track of mine

[daveparker]

Ok, third try at posting this. If the other two appear ignore them.

This is a Trance track I wrote several years ago now. I still like it
at 11min 36min long it's a bit of an epic track. Done on minimal
gear as well.

groove-uk.com/temporal/TemporalDistortion-Life_After_Birth.m3u

Would like to hear any comments from the board.

Thanks

Dave

 

[Valiance7]

Listening to it now on some headphones....sounds sweet. I really like the bell part.

Seems like all the synths kind've overwhelm the drums and bass at about 1:40 which kinda looses the trance for me you know.

Love the transition at about 2:40.

Really like the chill part at 4:35 and the crowd noise. That was a pretty darn good crowd noise sample. Ahh there's my bells again...love 'em.

I like the snare roll+keyboard of some kind that pitches down and back up but I feel it's a little too loud in the mix and again takes away from the rest of the song.

Not really diggin the synth lead at 9:36 or so. It seems a bit too quanitzed for the notes. Needs to be a little smoother/funkier.

All in all I really like it.

B