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[yankee22k3]

This is the first song i have ever written it is more of a rap with a slow tempo

CHICAGO

yo girl i only knew ya for 2 days

but in my town i wish u would stay

girl i wish u would be wit me

cuz i promise u the only girl i would see

girl u kno i would never cheat ya

never deciet ya, only be real wit ya

Chicago i swear to always be loyal

cuz u the only woman i wanna spoil

girl i hope u realize this is comin from my heart

i said girl i wish u and me would never be apart

but in the end the fact remains

CHORUS

Chicago <(slow chant) i hardly even knew ya

Chicago the girl i'll always be tru to

Chicago the one i always be down for

Chicago without u my heart is forever sore


For those still confused i aint rappin bout the city

im speakin bout the lady who made all my jewelry

i met her at vegas, sort of

but she was more beautiful than anything i ever thought of

Chicago u had me wishin i was kanye

but not for the dough only to live in the same state

that is blessed with ur presence

cuz girl for u i go toe to toe with 50 cent and

girl u gotta kno that i aint playin games

i just hope that someday u'll say my name

but once again the fact remains

CHORUS

Girl i kno i didnt even kiss ya

but that aint gonna stop me from missin ya

Chicago maybe i dont even know ya

but i just want the chance to show ya

that my feelings for u are real

and u are the only one that can heal

the damage that has been done to my heart

from all the ladies who would have no part

on my search for love

but Chicago u are the one

but the fact still reamins

CHORUS

 

[tamias]

Yank!
I like it. I like the flow. I think rap writing has its pros and cons. I'd like to see you slow it down even more...I think we're going toward a new era in music. When a ring tone hits No.1 in England...maybe we shouldn't be writing lyrics at all....??? Screw it! Keep writing, but beware... Iron Butterfly's.. InaGaddavida...on vinyl is gonna be a collectors item.