Rap song feedback

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What do ya'll think of my song that i recorded. What do you think about the song/mixing/the recording/lyrics. Give me your honest opinion.Thx


My song
 
I think that the number one shortcoming is your delivery; its often impossible to understand what you are saying. But delivery just comes with practice and experience
 
I was feelin the beat it was hott, some parts wer hard to understand but lyrucs were aight, good drop
 
I agree with the guys about not being able to hear what you are saying. You have a decent flow though. Did you make that beat because honestly it's the best part of the whole thing.
 
treal talk tho its 2007...

n you spittin like its 1995...


iono its coo tho...
 
northern cali said:
treal talk tho its 2007...

n you spittin like its 1995...


iono its coo tho...
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If that's the case, he's proabably better than 95% of artists out right now.

I really wish it was 1995 again... musically speaking. :(
 
mmm, i dont know about that, people tend to only remember tha good rap from tha 90s n never any of tha bad stuff

i aint sayin 90s shit is wack tha 90s had hella classics but........its not 1995 anymore n dude needs to get wit tha times...
 
northern cali said:
mmm, i dont know about that, people tend to only remember tha good rap from tha 90s n never any of tha bad stuff

i aint sayin 90s shit is wack tha 90s had hella classics but........its not 1995 anymore n dude needs to get wit tha times...
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If by "getting with the times" you mean, "rap like the stars of today" then I completely disagree.
 
nah i meant dont use tha basic ryme patterns they used in tha 80s n 90s
 
I also agree, hard to understand some of what you're saying. But the lyrics are great and the flow work really well.
 
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