Rap song feedback

[mtown408]

What do ya'll think of my song that i recorded. What do you think about the song/mixing/the recording/lyrics. Give me your honest opinion.Thx


My song

 

[Che Frone]

I think that the number one shortcoming is your delivery; its often impossible to understand what you are saying. But delivery just comes with practice and experience

 

[Noddy301]

DC Love! ya dig Che Frone

 

[ammarg89]

I was feelin the beat it was hott, some parts wer hard to understand but lyrucs were aight, good drop

 

[Morocco]

I agree with the guys about not being able to hear what you are saying. You have a decent flow though. Did you make that beat because honestly it's the best part of the whole thing.

 

[northern cali]

treal talk tho its 2007...

n you spittin like its 1995...


iono its coo tho...

 

[Change of POETS]

treal talk tho its 2007...

n you spittin like its 1995...


iono its coo tho...

If that's the case, he's proabably better than 95% of artists out right now.

I really wish it was 1995 again... musically speaking.

 

[northern cali]

mmm, i dont know about that, people tend to only remember tha good rap from tha 90s n never any of tha bad stuff

i aint sayin 90s shit is wack tha 90s had hella classics but........its not 1995 anymore n dude needs to get wit tha times...

 

[Change of POETS]

mmm, i dont know about that, people tend to only remember tha good rap from tha 90s n never any of tha bad stuff

i aint sayin 90s shit is wack tha 90s had hella classics but........its not 1995 anymore n dude needs to get wit tha times...

If by "getting with the times" you mean, "rap like the stars of today" then I completely disagree.

 

[northern cali]

nah i meant dont use tha basic ryme patterns they used in tha 80s n 90s

 

[cpmusick]

I also agree, hard to understand some of what you're saying. But the lyrics are great and the flow work really well.