Haha! Cool! It really does remind me a little of Bob Dylan during the late 1970s trying to cover a Dave Matthews or Ben Harper song.
I actually like how it's a nearly unmodified recording. No unneeded effects. Today's popular music is so laden with processed sound that people forget what it sounds like to have just an instrument and a voice. It takes real musical talent to be able to record a song with just an
acoustic guitar or 2 and your voice and have it sound decent. It's a real measure of talent IMO.
The other issue with popular music resting so heavily on computerized effects is that budding musicians trying to do home recordings automatically get the urge to go all out on the effects and end up turning their mix into a piece of Computer-trash when all the while it would sound better with just a simple mic up of the guitar and vocals.
I like that your voice is way up front. I wouldn't tone it down any more than it is. That's where the heart of the song is and that's where you should keep it. You're voice is really unique, it gives you a strong identity and I think it should be up front.
Also, I didn't know myspace.com had a musician thing on it. That's pretty cool! Thanks for showing me that (even though it was involuntary

). However, I'm really not a big fan of that whole community, but it's cool that they've got a chunk of it sectioned off for musicians.
I agree with some of the others in that the recording sounds a little dry and boxy. If you've got the means, get a more interesting mic combination/positioning on your guitty, EQ them accordingly so they compliment each other, and blend one a good bit left and the other right. That'll create a much more thick and in-the-room guitar sound from my experience.
Keep it up!