It's a nice, pleasant tune, very folky indeed. I must say, though, that I'm not entirely sure I understand the message of the song. It could be that I'm just thick, but I'm not sure I understand the meaning of "put on your coat" (which is changed to "hang up" at the end) throughout the song.
The recording sounds nice overall, if maybe a bit dull in the highs. I think it could really be helped with maybe some tambourine or other percussion entering at the second verse to spur it along a bit.
Also, in the bridge, there's a chord that seems out of place to me. After "hero doesn't fight to win again," you stay on the I chord for a bit and then decorate it with a IV chord move. (Sounds as if you're playing in G and you add the E on string 2 and C on string 1 to make a C/G.) This is then followed by a C chord. IMO, that C chord's effect is weakened because you already went to it while you were on the G chord. Typically, a G7 would be used there to lead to the C. (You can hear the same device in lots of Beatles bridges for sure.)
Anyway, take all this with a grain of salt. I enjoyed the listen. Thanks for sharing!
In general it was pretty good.
Something weird with the lead vocal at :33 on the word "drive." Like you went from a foot away from the mic to about 2 in. A couple more of those things later.
Little gak with the banjo on the right at about :46? Like there was a little stutter in the strumming. Might have been how you wanted it. Dunno.
The vocals were pretty far out in front. But I think for a song like this, that's the way it should be.
The instruments have a bit of a chorus-y sound. Might be SC doing it, not sure.
edit - also noticed the instruments lacked a little high end. Slightly dull.
Cool tune. I don't really like the sound of the instruments. I'm not sure what's going on with them. The left sounds like a buzzy 12 string and the right sounds like a banjo or something. I'm not entirely sure what it is. It's a good song I like it. Just the way the instruments are spread is distracting I guess.
It's pretty cool. Phil's right about the instruments sounding a little off. maybe they're just brighter and higher-fi than the vocals?
I might also be inclined to drop the harmonies during a few phrases, just to add more dynamic contrast.