I like it man.
A few things you might want to look at...
Either bring everything besides the vocals up just a TAD or take your vocals down just a little bit, just to make everything else sound more balanced.
The vocals are in a very different style, but they fit the song quite well I think. They would benefit from having some effects put on them I think to sort of give them a different feel, like maybe some compression, or a tiny bit of distortion or chorus.
The backing harmonies in the pre-chorus part of the chorus part or whatever it is, sound really cool.
Maybe bring the overhead mics on the drums up a bit, or bring the hi-hat mic up a tad, as well as raising the level of everything else a tad. Add a bit more reverb to the snare (and most other things on the drums for experimentation) just to see if you can get more of an open feel, which I think would fit the song well.
These aren't really things I think are necesarily wrong with your recording. I think it is very good, but you could just try a few of these things out to see if it changes it up in a good way.
Keep up the good stuff man.
