Ouch, piercing highs in this mix. That would be my first suggestion - eq those down a bit. You've mastered it pretty good. It sounds Japanese a bit monotonous take a cue from kcearl's tune for variety. That heavily distorted patch us too loud.
Hmm Japanese you say. Ill take care of highs and lows later, i'm more concerned with content and such at this point. I'm replacing the wobbles with something lower. I'm listening to kcearl's stuff, and it's awesome
