One more for the road

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"Once Upon a Time"

Montezuma, the gods came to you
as half beast and half man
Borne on the winds of fate
they set upon your lands
You showered them with gifts of gold
to try and stay their hand
Yet they kept coming ever closer
with more and more demands

Quetzequotal, great god on high help us

Montezuma, what happeded to you
you simply couldnt comprehend
That Cortez and his band of brigands
were nothing more than men
Bound and frozen by chains of myth
you couldnt take a stand
Forced to bow against your will
your empire turned to sand

Great god that shakes the earth save us

How could this happen to you the greatest of them all
Surely the son of heaven, certainly to fall
On the altar of a new faith, the hand of destiny
Calling out with all of its weight
the way that its shall be
Montezuma

Montezuma, we still see you
through the eye of history
As a great man in a great land
caught up in a tragedy
Fought by men of wealth and power
from lands across the sea
Where nothing is sacred and all is empty
where greed is allmighty

Great god of mountain fire save us

How could this happen to you the greatest of them all
Surely the son of heaven, certainly to fall
On the altar of a new faith, the hand of destiny
Calling out with all of its weight
the way that its shall be


Montezuma

Montezuma
 
Here's the correct link Lt. :D

Cool tune DW....
I dig your music man...
The recording is a bit dull though....
if either the vox or guitar could come out more in the mix it would be super cool...a little too forward in the mix and they sound good but not bassy enough....cymbal hits are a bit weak level wise too compared to the drums...
nice hits for sure...great performance...

Take it easy man,
Joe
 
Very cool tune!!

Like the guitar parts, and singing.

Big nit, the drums are completely out of proportion with the rest of the mix. Tone them down!!

Don't ditch this song, go for the remix!!

GT
 
Definitely a cool tune......singing is good.....all the playing is good also......drums are a little too loud and the guitar really needs to come up. I also agree with an earlier comment that the overall mix is a bit 'dull'. Could use a slight boost in the 5 or 6k region.
Nice!
 
Very cool. Agree with everything that has been said. Yep, even the first comment by Lt. Bob LOL (I clicked on the bad link first :D )

What do I have to smoke to get such a voice? ;)
 
Wow, that's catchy

Kind of a 60's sound. Nice little ditty. I would bring that cool guitar up a little and back off a bit on the drums.
 
dw at his best. man, I like this a lot too. you and the band, do ya'll still gig regularly? I hope so.

Dan
 
Love the song. Love you DW. Must remix. Drums are not just too prominent but sloppy playing. I would rerecord the vocal too; you can sing much better than this -- quit smokin' so much will 'ya -- Seriously I care!
 
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