Ok.. I am nervous

[true-eurt]

Kiwi, I waited and waited for the download and still didn't get it. Is this a new rerecorded one, or the one you sent me already?

 

[true-eurt]

I just listened to the new version ya sent me kiwi!! That is great!! Sounds as though you have yourself a new vocalist !!!! I love her voice...

The song sounds full...I do miss the opening vocals. They were haunting and gave the song some deep emotion to open with. I wish you would put them back.

 

[rayc]

The re work on Passerby is really good BUT the the 1st few syllables of the vocal line are way too quiet. Can you crank those few syllables a bit 39 - 41 sec in?
Good work!

 

[Freudian Slip]

First of all cool song. I guess from the posts that I just listened to the the reworked version???? Sounds good. I guess the only thing that stood out to me was that on my set up the backing vocal track/tracks seemed to stand out more than the main vocal track. I think that they should be set back into the mix a little bit more. When the secondary track echos the same lyrics I feel it should be less up front than the main vocal track. Other than that there are a few bright/harsh spots on the main voacals that I think may be able to be fixed with some eq.

Anyway. I think you did a great job and your wife too!

F.S.

 

[ido1957]

First of all cool song. I guess from the posts that I just listened to the the reworked version???? Sounds good. I guess the only thing that stood out to me was that on my set up the backing vocal track/tracks seemed to stand out more than the main vocal track. I think that they should be set back into the mix a little bit more. When the secondary track echos the same lyrics I feel it should be less up front than the main vocal track. Other than that there are a few bright/harsh spots on the main voacals that I think may be able to be fixed with some eq.

Anyway. I think you did a great job and your wife too!

F.S.

Freudian Slip's comments are very much what I was thinking while listening. I also found the drums a bit much at the beginning of the song, and they fit in nicely once the song gets going. I would maybe put guitars in there right away at the beginning - like at 0:25.....

A little flute or other folk-type instrument would only add to this song....

Very catchy song with nice rhythm for swaying or dancing.....

 

[TheRockinDonkey]

Your wife's voice reminds me a little of Geddy Lee. I like it.

 

[wilko]

Thanks chaps - I am going to work a bit more on it later this week. Great advice from some knowledgeable people. I am not nervous about posting stuff anymore - thanks!

 

[scottwx897]

Hello

Hi, I'm new here and use an mr-8 --or will soon.
How do I listen to this guy's song?

 

[chrisharris]

Hi, I'm new here and use an mr-8 --or will soon.
How do I listen to this guy's song?

Ask Dragon (Lord and Master of this bbs) to put signatures back in. He won't do it, but it's always funny to ask him to do stuff.