You have a damn fine mix going on there. I haven’t heard the other versions, only this one.
The only thing I would do different is to pan the drums more narrow. When I listen to recorded music, I like to close my eyes and imagine that I am sitting in front of the band at a live show. Since the drums are usually in the middle of the stage, that’s the direction they should come from on the recording. They do need some panning for reality, you don’t want it to sound drab, but not from the far sides of the stage.
The vocals are up front real good but almost too much in my face. I know you want them to be the center of attention but, when I try to focus my attention on any other instrument; they are at the verge of not allowing it. That guys’ voice cuts through naturally so when they are pushed forward in the recording, they seem to be demanding my attention a little more than they need to. You need to be careful with tweaking this one because it is easy to get them too far back also. There must be a happy medium in there somewhere.
Everything else is right there in the groove. You sure found the sweet spot. It’s an enjoyable tune and easy to listen to. Many folks will walk away with it stuck in their heads.