HevyD47Ca New member Nov 11, 2003 #1 This is probably not a bad mix BUT, I'm not getting anything lyrically. Oh well, I'm sure it will come to me.............. In the meantime, rake it over the coals pleeze
This is probably not a bad mix BUT, I'm not getting anything lyrically. Oh well, I'm sure it will come to me.............. In the meantime, rake it over the coals pleeze
T The Ghost of FM Banned Nov 11, 2003 #2 Nice groove, Dan! I get a kind of "Polk Salad Annie" kind of vibe from this one. The drums are sounding a little on the lo-fi side but the playing over all is soulful and well executed. Great guitar work too. Maybe lyrically, you could structure it with a talking part, kinna like telling a story and then have a sung chorus part to bring it all together. Possible stories to tell: A cheatin' women Bein' so broke you had to pan handle money off a bum! An evil boss I don't know?! Maybe make a writing post out of this one Dan, if your really stuck for words? Cheers!
Nice groove, Dan! I get a kind of "Polk Salad Annie" kind of vibe from this one. The drums are sounding a little on the lo-fi side but the playing over all is soulful and well executed. Great guitar work too. Maybe lyrically, you could structure it with a talking part, kinna like telling a story and then have a sung chorus part to bring it all together. Possible stories to tell: A cheatin' women Bein' so broke you had to pan handle money off a bum! An evil boss I don't know?! Maybe make a writing post out of this one Dan, if your really stuck for words? Cheers!
Qwerty New member Nov 11, 2003 #3 G'day, Nice slinky little groove - I see your lyric skulking along and then resolving up to chorus into the 5-7-5 bits. With it playing I could hear/see A guy sittin' on a street..... a fine lady walk on by.... Knowin' she's just too fine for him ...but looking anyway... The "chorus" then becomes a plea for recognition Can't help the symptoms, send me a sign/smile Nice solo, as always Put a tidy, sweet little ending on the final product too please! Q.
G'day, Nice slinky little groove - I see your lyric skulking along and then resolving up to chorus into the 5-7-5 bits. With it playing I could hear/see A guy sittin' on a street..... a fine lady walk on by.... Knowin' she's just too fine for him ...but looking anyway... The "chorus" then becomes a plea for recognition Can't help the symptoms, send me a sign/smile Nice solo, as always Put a tidy, sweet little ending on the final product too please! Q.
E elephant New member Nov 12, 2003 #4 love the tone and groove of the grt lets hear some more of the snare, turn it up ; ) do you record analogue? nice tones
love the tone and groove of the grt lets hear some more of the snare, turn it up ; ) do you record analogue? nice tones