New to this. Feedback appreciated.

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I listened to "Another day".

It is an interesting mixture.

In general, I like the musical ideas about the production, and the overall sound is pretty good.

The mix, though is kind of unsettling. There's a lot of guitar on one side, a lot of synth on the other. At other times, I hear a background vocal way in the left. Theoretically, it should sound balanced (and it may do if you are listening to speakers, and some distance from them), but through headphones it sounds disconcerting.

I didn't get all the lyrics, but I guess they fitted with the song okay.

You might like to think about posting lyrics here along with the link to the recording, so we can get a better idea of what you are writing about.
 
Sunshine...

I'm pretty impressed! Nice melody, and pretty good music. The recording quality is pretty good too. If I have any critisizm it would be that the Chorus melody could use a little more modulation (if thats the right word). All 4 sentences in the chorus are almost the same melody. I kept hoping to hear a change in there somewhere. Like maybe in the second sentence change it up a little...

Just my 2 cents...

Overall thats a great job!

And I too would like to see the lyrics :)
 
Thanks for the feedback!

The lyrics are now on the site. Just click the "i" next to the song.

Thanks!
 
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